It has been seen that reporters mainly prefer to report those news which are related to issues like crime and emergencies instead of good news. Hence, some natives believe that these types of news have a negative impact on the people’s life and society. However, I feel these reporting brings awareness and show what is actually happening around our surroundings.
To begin with, there are immense benefits of such news to an individual. First among of them is awareness. When media reports news related to crimes for instance murder, kidnapping, rapes etc. Then, Through these news people not only become aware, but also put efforts to protect themselves and their near and dear ones from facing any kind of circumstances like this. Overall, News puts a positive impact on the lives of people. Furthermore, if media shows only good news related to development and achievements which I also consider very crucial for us but it doesn’t represent the real picture of the world.
Moreover, when some emergency happen all over the world. Media is the only medium through which people get information regarding this. For example, nowadays corona virus is spreading all over the world at high rate and people are becoming aware regarding this through social media, newspaper, news channels etc. They are adopting preservatives measures to save themselves. This has made possible due to the reporting. Last but not the least, everyone has a right to know what is actually happening around the world whether it is positive or negative .
In conclusion, although any kind of negative news bring some sort of disgrace and stress in everyone’s life but it can not be denied that it alerts the citizens and made them informed person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 57, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'those newses'?
Suggestion: this news; those newses
... that reporters mainly prefer to report those news which are related to issues like crime ...
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Line 1, column 151, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...emergencies instead of good news. Hence, some natives believe that these types of...
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Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... crimes for instance murder, kidnapping, rapes etc. Then, Through these news peop...
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Line 5, column 551, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...world whether it is positive or negative . In conclusion, although any kind of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, kind of, sort of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07692307692 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59922840408 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611888111888 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.1038251355 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.75 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8125 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130357980304 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427801990866 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294650455046 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0775249952293 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036440239954 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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