Nowadays, there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Reports of media are increasingly showing daily problems and emergencies rather than the positive ones. Some people say that this development could have an adverse effect on individuals and society. However, I completely disagree with this and believe that its benefits are more significant.
As social media has been developed, people have more access to daily news and information, especially ones related to crime or emergencies, and this could raise people’s awareness. By watching criminal reports, people could be more conscious of different types of crime that they might encounter in certain circumstances. For example, pickpockets are often common in crowded areas such as supermarkets and street markets, and it is of vital importance to watch out accessories or wallets when people are shopping. Therefore, reports related in minor crimes just like that help people become well-prepared and reduce the risk of dangers.
Apart from the benefit expressed above, a focus on bad news and emergencies also benefits the whole society. First, reports of fatal accidents perhaps would make people terrified but at the same time, they may realize the bad consequence of fast driving. As a result, that type of report facilitates road safety as people gradually obey the driving rules. Second, problems and emergencies posted by reporters also help governments recognize its harmful impacts and thus implement proper solutions to prevent them from happening in the first place. Therefore, people would enjoy a safe environment to live and they are spared criminal commitment and other kinds of problem.
In conclusion, the benefits of showing bad news and emergencies have been proved to have several impacts on people's lives and society. In the long run, this development could contribute to better awareness among people and a safer environment for people to live.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, thus, well, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43003412969 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84358310795 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60409556314 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4636568015 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.642857143 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7857142857 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248481480546 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087193418458 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680277354804 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161929390196 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0851806291628 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.