In the contemporary society, tourism has indeed become a major industry in many countries, contributing significantly to their national income. While some suppose this growth in tourism creates new occupation opening for local people, others think that it endangers to natural environment, in particular wildlife habitat. This essay seeks to discuss the impact of tourism in relation to the merits and demerits it impacts.
On the one hand, tourists require services such as transportation, accommodation renting or food and beverage. Therefore, the residents are capable of accelerating the local economy from cuisine or house-renting, which can enhance their quality of life. This is strikingly exemplified by big companies which provides service for tourists so that they have an unforgettable experience in that landscape. This can bring more business and cultural collaborations in long terms, which fosters the development of national economy and spend it on the constructions and improvements of both the landscapes and the service quality. As a result, the residents make their living by working for such organizations as tour guides with a well-paid salary. Furthermore, the development of tourism also helps local people to introduce their traditions and cultures. To illustrate, tourists came to Bat Trang village , which is traditionally renowned for its pottery-making, to buy some souvenirs or to experience how to make a pottery. Therefore, the workshop's owner can propagandize its tradition and culture through handicrafts to any tourists from all over the world.
Notwithstanding, mass tourism can have a detrimental impact on the environment. Overcrowding, pollution, and the construction of tourism infrastructure can harm fragile ecosystems and damage natural beauty. To illustrate, travelers have the propensity to transport by their private vehicles, most commonly are cars and motorcycles. This has such a noticeable impact on the environment as these kinds of vehicles exhaust gases, fumes, which causes pollution. This makes the animals, particularly endangered ones who live in such polluted environment have lung diseases and consequently, the wildlife habitat is on the verge of extinction. In addition, not only do the animals have to face, but the people also suffer from. Popular tourist destinations struggle to cope with the strain on their infrastructure, leading to issues like traffic congestion and if it is not remedied, the implications could encompass the increasing rates of accidents, therefore, many people have to suffer from the loss of their beloved ones, who mean the most important to them.
From my perspective, I firmly believe that its advantageous side are outweighed by the adverse ones as there is no denying that the existence of wildlife and people are the most important compared to any of the benefits that tourism bring.
In conclusion, the growth of tourism has make such a substantial contribution to the development of a country in economy and local life. However, it is undeniable that the demerits it causes affect significantly to human beings and wildlife. Therefore, people had better raise awareness of tourism and protect the environment.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 901, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rate, tourists came to Bat Trang village , which is traditionally renowned for its...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, as to, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2727.0 1615.20841683 169% => OK
No of words: 492.0 315.596192385 156% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54268292683 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70967865282 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25434628804 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 176.041082164 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534552845528 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 862.2 506.74238477 170% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9047379554 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.954545455 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3636363636 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77272727273 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163053628402 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488494099737 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510575287102 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104001005097 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497236238454 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 154.0 78.4519038076 196% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 901, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rate, tourists came to Bat Trang village , which is traditionally renowned for its...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, as to, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2727.0 1615.20841683 169% => OK
No of words: 492.0 315.596192385 156% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54268292683 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70967865282 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25434628804 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 176.041082164 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534552845528 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 862.2 506.74238477 170% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9047379554 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.954545455 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3636363636 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77272727273 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163053628402 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488494099737 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510575287102 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104001005097 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497236238454 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 154.0 78.4519038076 196% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.