Nowadays, tourism has developed and contributed a significant portion of national income to its own country. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this development and give your opinion.
For the time being, coming along with unstoppable growing world, tourism has already been becoming a popular and huge worldwide industry. Some people suppose that it is generating a crucial portion of developing the country while opponents consider this tendency as a factor causing destruction of nature. In these following paragraphs, I will analyze both the pros and cons and then present my own perspective for this hot topic.
On the one hand, there is no denying that tourism has provided several considerable advantages which are promoting its beautiful image to the world and pushing our national economy. Initially, tourism helps to discover deeper insight of diverse traditions and customs, boosting the unity between people of all races, backgrounds and cultures all over the world. When someone travels to somewhere, they will be met the demand of satisfying their taste with different attractive places, resulting to the diverse knowledge and new vision of our life. Secondly, thanks to tourism, our country' s economic growth potential is improving day by day when big businesses are given more opportunities to cooperate with international companies in long terms so that they can take the advantages completely. Moreover, appealing tourists to landscapes assist the locals to raise their income, reduce unemployment.
On the other hand, beside good points I have mentioned, drawbacks are unavoidable even in travelers. To commence with, since too many tourists have pay visits to these well-known attractions, as an outcome of unaware tourists who littering waste haphazardly, historical heritages, natural wildlife as well as animal's inhabitants are being in danger and can be destroyed badly in the foreseeable future. Consequently, the increase in travelers may spoil the beauty of nature, flora and fauna. Additionally, there is a fact that tourism's strong development might accelerate the high risk of transmitting infectious disease among people. The most principal example for this issue is the wide spread of Corona through travelling. In 2021, after months being home to prevent the Covid-19 pandemic.
From my point of view, I believe that its beneficial aspects are more significant than the adverse ones. As long as governments give policy conserve the environment and preserve historical heritages countries can benefit from touristy in many fields.
In conclusion, the development of tourism has contributed such substantial upside to the country as economic growth and the country's image promoting and also exist drawbacks which are the environmental destruction and the hazard to health. Nevertheless, finding out the appropriate solutions not only helps to balance the pros and cons but also improve tourism fully.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2329.0 1615.20841683 144% => OK
No of words: 424.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4929245283 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94429469687 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 176.041082164 155% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643867924528 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 727.2 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.5136705298 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.388888889 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5555555556 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94444444444 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199622320696 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494634232258 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05149599663 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998107578179 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359265968013 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 78.4519038076 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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