In contemporary society, there has been a noticeable increase in the number of adults who continue to reside with their parents even after completing their university education and securing stable employment. This essay aims to explore both the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon and provide my perspective.
One prevailing notion is that this living arrangement fosters stronger family bonds. Regular communication within the household, especially as parents age, leads to the development of close-knit relationships. Children often express their gratitude by caring for their aging parents. For example, many families have the tradition of spending Sundays picnicking together, providing an opportunity for shared joy and the chance to confide in one another about work-related stress. Consequently, they learn from each other's experiences, cultivating a family-oriented mindset, and becoming dependable pillars of support for other family members during times of adversity.
While learning from parents is undoubtedly valuable, practical experience gained through independent living offers unique advantages. When grown-up children depend heavily on their parents for household chores and financial support to meet personal needs, such as shopping, they may become overly reliant. In many Asian cultures, parents tend to remain overly protective even when their children have reached adulthood, regardless of their independent activities. This can result in a deficiency of essential life skills, which are critical for their future endeavors.
In conclusion, despite the benefits associated with living with one's family, such as strengthened relationships and personal growth, as mentioned above, I personally believe that independent living fosters greater maturity and self-reliance, enabling individuals to acquire vital survival skills. It is important to note that individuals can still maintain a close connection with their families through regular visits and holidays. Consequently, the advantages of independence and real-life experience outweigh the benefits of living with one's parents.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child s success in school Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 73
- Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
- Children today are to dependent on computers and electronic entertainment It would be better for them to be outside playing sports and taking part in more traditional past times than spending all day indoors Do you agree or disagree with the statement Wri 56
- In some countries more young adults continue to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 89
- Children today are to dependent on computers and electronic entertainment It would be better for them to be outside playing sports and taking part in more traditional past times than spending all day indoors Do you agree or disagree with the statement Wri 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, may, so, still, then, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.12751677852 5.12529762239 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09672458681 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651006711409 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.417901342 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.428571429 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246493115864 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786539797194 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673947552678 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152192032218 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726286328089 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.78 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.27 12.4159519038 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.2 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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