It is believed that face-to-face contact is being replaced by using social media in daily life. From my perspective, although this development is disadvantageous to some extent, its drawbacks are eclipsed by its benefits.
Granted, it is understandable why some might subscribe to the viewpoint that online means of socialization has a range of disadvantages. The first rationale for this is that it makes people lose their social skills, given that individuals who use social media for communicating tend to have a sedentary lifestyle. For example, Facebook users will be lazier to communicate in person due to its convenient chatting function. As a result, it can affect body language, facial expressions and the way people communicate. Another notable argument for this is that social media can reduce the quality of relationships. This is because people do not have enough authentic experience and information to check whether it is a scam or not. Consequently, the intimacy that appears when meeting face-to-face can be lost.
Notwithstanding the aforementioned arguments, there are compelling reasons to believe that it is more beneficial to contact through social media. First and foremost, it can facilitate connectivity among people, considering that individuals are keeping in touch with others conveniently. To illustrate, people who have long-distance relationships are still able to maintain and get along well with others. For this reason, people will not have any geographical boundaries. To add credence to my argument, individuals can express themselves freely on the Internet. In fact, there are a large number of people who are socially awkward, with this use of social media, each person is more likely to have their own freedom of speech. This is a compelling testament to show that people can expand a large social network and find like-minded friends.
In conclusion, I would restate my position that while there are certain drawbacks of using social media, its advantages are more significant.
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- Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion Give reasons for your ans 84
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 583, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, so, still, then, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42721518987 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20905892829 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569620253165 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2396138364 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.882352941 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5882352941 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17917163959 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591797602653 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525566322218 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124636622636 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195836345064 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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