Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening. What can government do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
It is true that the amount of waste produced by habitants and industrial factories saw a significant increase over many past decades. There could be several reasons why this is the case, and I believe that governments could take some effective actions and suggest measures to improve the situation perfectly.
There are various reasons why the amount of rubbish raised significantly throughout history. Firstly, overpopulation was the biggest problem, which certainly leads to higher demands for hospitable facilities, manufacturing clothes and food packages. As a result, a great deal of waste was given out. Secondly, the improvement of the waste treatment system could not keep pace with the speed of industrial revolutionary, so a large amount of untreated waste was discharged into rivers or oceans. Last but not least, it is common to use plastic bags in almost situations of our lives, and people tend to throw away these bags after using once time only, not into garbage bins, but into everywhere around us.
In my opinion, our government plays an essential role to cut the amount of rubbish produced by enforced regulations and awareness education. Our government should put more taxes on the packaging, especially plastic package, and offer some recycling services in public to drop the amount of garbage around us. Another suggestion is that the government needs to raise the awareness of students about harmful effects when people discharge waste into the environment through learning materials as well as provide them with some useful methods to recycle effectively in their own houses.
In conclusion, there are many typical reasons contributing to the increase in the garbage in our society, and the government has the responsibility to eliminate that issue. From my point of view, the government needs to raise the awareness of citizens to step-by-step prevent bad consequences in the future.
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- Internet when used as a source of information, has more drawbacks than advantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
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- Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening. What can government do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 491, Rule ID: LEARN_NNNNS_ON_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to'?
Suggestion: to
... environment through learning materials as well as provide them with some useful m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30921052632 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90863142609 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.4086900739 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.5 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138643365309 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529911827209 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547645071263 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0811473594711 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410944171018 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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