Nowadays , women as well as men work full time. Therefore, women and men should share household tasks equally. ( eg cleaning and looking after children ).To what extent do you agree or disagree?
These days, both men and women can have full-time employment, so there are different views about whether women should take charge of all the household chores like in the past. To me, I completely side with the opinion of distributing domestic tasks evenly among family members when both spouses are working.
To begin with, sharing household would help strengthen the family relationship. When people cooperate to solve problems, they tend to take on the tasks that they have the best ability to do. For example, women can be superior in terms of food preparation, while men prefer doing maintenance work. In this way, husbands or wives can discover their partner’s strengths and weaknesses, and they learn more skills from each other by assisting with the chores. Not only that, sharing housework may be a good way for people to unwind after a difficult day at work. While doing those chores together, they can discuss their experiences, problems at office, and conversely, they can receive words of advice and encouragement from their partners.
Furthermore, if a person, generally a woman, who works full time, has to handle household duty alone, she may become overwhelmed, which leads to several problems. First, those people could feel disrespected since they are occupied with various kinds of housework, while their partners are relaxing or chatting with friends despite the fact that they both can home after an office day. This may lead to conflicts between family members. Second, people have the same amount of time in a day, so handling both housework alone and full-time employment means the burden that they have is much greater than the others. Gradually, they may get stressed out at both office and their home, which may result in exhaustion.
In conclusion, unlike in the past when men used to be the sole breadwinner, and women took responsibility of the household, today, members in a family should share those tasks equally to foster mutual respect and prevent unfortunate consequences.
- Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it Discuss both these views and give your own opinion Give reasons for your answer 67
- Some people think that instead of preventing climate change we need to find a way to live with it To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Rich countries often give money to poorer countries but it does not solve poverty Therefore developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your a 73
- Some people think spoken communication is more powerful than written communication To what extent do you agree or disagree 44
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... a person, generally a woman, who works full time, has to handle household duty alone, sh...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, then, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13981762918 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67288894752 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613981762918 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2617717179 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.785714286 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193450179891 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698224697145 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715150530168 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140217022754 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523310793954 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.