Nuclear energy is a better choice for meeting increasing demand, agree or disagree.
Nowadays, natural resources are decreasing due to human consumption and nuclear energy is considered as an alternative. Increasing demand in society make people look for other alternative resources, leading to nuclear consumption. I embark that I firmly disagree with this idea and I am going to explain more in this essay.
Firstly, nuclear energy can produce radiation and the radiation is portentous for the environment and human due to scientific evidences. This possibly could be a major drawback for using nuclear energy inasmuch as it has higher risk if there is malfunction, causing a lot of illness such as cancer, cardiovascular disease and even death. For example, in the year of 1986, there was nuclear reactor explosion at Chernobyl which caused majority of people suffer. In addition, nuclear misappropriation as weapon could probably happen. By this, it seems that it leads to nuclear war. Concerning the impact of radiation, it can be harmful for the environment since explosion from nuclear boom has wide range radius if it explodes. Moreover, to preserve the nuclear reactor requires lots of funding since it is necessary to keep it from leakage due to nature form from nuclear itself which remains unstable.
I accept that it might be correct, nuclear usage has some advantages such as reducing consumption of fossil energy and decreasing gas emission. In spite of nuclear energy having a lot of hazardous effect, I would suggest that there are many alternative resources like biogases and wind reactor which are safer.
In conclusion, I prefer that nuclear energy usage has many drawbacks for the human and environment because of hazardous damages. Consuming less harmful resources such as biogases and wind reactor is wiser in order to prevent society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, moreover, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24912280702 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85801050889 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543859649123 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.247838885 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.857142857 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263397999174 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940706598216 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491448304032 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158286081777 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482452647324 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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