As the number of commercials is on the on our TV, many viewers feel annoyed and claim that commercials should be banned. Do you agree with the idea?
It is sometimes argued that the number of advertisement are rising on television which make audiences feel angry. Although I agree with the opinion that commercials bring many benefit for viewers, advertising also causes disadvantages for many people.
On the one hand, advertisements on the TV bring many benefit to the viewers. Firstly, commercials provide information of products which you want to buy. For example, when you want to buy any product but you do not know quality of it, advertising will help you to consider before buying it. Next, the commercials is a form of entertainment, it is an useful way to reduce stress after a busy day.
On the other hand, the commercials also causes drawbacks that make many people feel uncomfortable and bother. For example, advertising interrupt the viewers when they are watching their favorite program. This make they annoyed and angry. Besides, it also exaggerates the function of the product is not true and make them confused whenever they try to choose suitable product. Finally, many people use advertisement to defraud viewers and this make people to buy the things and that is a waste of money.
To sum up, the commercial can be helpful for the viewers, but it also bring many disadvantages that make many people feel annoyed and uncomfortable by different reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 172, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun benefit seems to be countable; consider using: 'many benefits'.
Suggestion: many benefits
...with the opinion that commercials bring many benefit for viewers, advertising also causes di...
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Line 2, column 49, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun benefit seems to be countable; consider using: 'many benefits'.
Suggestion: many benefits
...ne hand, advertisements on the TV bring many benefit to the viewers. Firstly, commercials pr...
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Line 2, column 346, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...cials is a form of entertainment, it is an useful way to reduce stress after a bus...
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Line 4, column 71, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'brings'?
Suggestion: brings
...be helpful for the viewers, but it also bring many disadvantages that make many peopl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, if, so, for example, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05479452055 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90789793402 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534246575342 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7658836601 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.25 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256627796935 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947944789233 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582060458312 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168843431011 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037585773431 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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