In a number of countries,some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities.Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People hold different views about whether funds should be allocated to the construction of high-speed trains or improving the existing public transit system. I believe that public transport facilities are of greater importance.
Investment in fast trains can bring more convenience to long journeys. People nowadays are willing to travel to other cities during the holiday and the fast speed of trains can help save a lot of time on roads. As a result, they are able to enjoying more joyful time in tourist attractions and freeing themselves from the heavy work. In addition, as a job requirement, many businessmen need to go on trips to different countries to cooperate with other workers of their companies. If the travelling time can be reduced to a large extent, this kind of business can happen more frequently and therefore increasing the work efficiency.
Improving the existing public transport can bring plenty of benefits to both society and individuals . Firstly, traffic congestion are very common in many metropolis and more subway lines should be build to relieve the pressure of surface-transportation. Secondly, commuters always consider the safety factors when travelling to and from workplace and public vehicles like bus and metro are much safer than private cars because they can leave drive to professionals. Finally, using more public transportation can improve the air quality by reducing the gas emissions.
In conclusion, there are both advantages of developing fast trains and public transport and I believe that latter need to be perfect urgently.
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- Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters(such as food,clothes and entertainment)is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes.Other people believe that it is important 61
- In a number of countries,some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities.Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport.Discuss both thes 56
- Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters(such as food,clothes and entertainment)is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes.Other people believe that it is important 11
- Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters(such as food,clothes and entertainment)is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes.Other people believe that it is important 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...benefits to both society and individuals . Firstly, traffic congestion are very co...
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Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun metropolis seems to be countable; consider using: 'many metropolises'.
Suggestion: many metropolises
..., traffic congestion are very common in many metropolis and more subway lines should be build t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34136546185 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05500507365 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610441767068 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4295892944 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.833333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211864478812 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844665326667 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648301188078 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154805964842 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061835296609 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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