There is no doubt that age expectancy will increase every year. The issue of increasing number of elderly people bring a positive and negative effects is the matter. This essay will discover whether it is more of positive effects or negative effects.
Some people think that most of the family member are happy when their family live longer than normally age. However, not only family member but anyone that live longer feel happy too. Another point is most of the workers are older people that live to work. This increasing aged population gives hope to elderly people who would like to enjoy their lives.
Furthermore, as far as I am concerned it has much negative effects. Firstly, they need more cost for health-care such as buying insurance. Moreover, more people claim their pension benefits early because they want to invest on health or buying medicine. Therefore, elderly people will suffer because of their conditions such as heart disease or stroke. On the other hand, if people live longer and they work as well, there is no chance for young generation to work because most of the positions has been taken by elderly people.
In conclusion, I believe that there is more negative effects than positive because of the reason above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1041.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 210.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95714285714 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31855866558 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57619047619 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4128481647 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.0769230769 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1538461538 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278277607092 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106631637311 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109752289255 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184705051052 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103002320721 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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