The number of overweight children in developed countries is increasing. Some people think this is due to problems such as the growing number of fast food outlets. Others believe that parents are to blame for not looking after their children's health.
To what extent do you agree with these views?
Opinions diverge on whether the surge in childen's obesity originates from the dominace of fast food instead of parents' responsibility. Although some avocate fervently this sentiment, I take the opposite attitude owing to some rational reasons.
Admittedly, the fast food if gaining popularity in all parts of the world due to the leaped pace of life. First, myriad types of fast food are manufactured with a high amount of calories and fat while thay are very much attractive through their appearences. Second, they are made cheaper than many products to attract custommers. Therefore, all this are the main reason of the drastic surge of weight in the body of children.
Further and more importantly, there will not have an exponential surge in the number of overweight childen if the parents pay more attention to their children. The guardians tend to make or buy fast food for their child to save time now that their busy works. Moreover, the children, who born with a silver spoon in his mouth are always pampered, So, the rate of overweight children if leap because of the response for them. For example, the proportion of childen's consuming fast food surge more than ever in many nations in Europe.
In conclusion, I believe that is a great matter of parent's responsibility to the overweight children instead of the leaping of fast food
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1124.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97345132743 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74334855834 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601769911504 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3927589419 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.181818182 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287088656925 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100493319468 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551580111638 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170410434348 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566666090745 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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