Improving physical look has increased amongst many people who are keen on plastic surgery to make sure they look more beautiful and handsome. People who are not happy with their physical appearance do operations especially celebrities. I believe it is not a positive improvement as many of them suffer from cancer at a later stage in life.
Celebrities are more curious about their physical look, moreover, they need to make sure people follow them in order to stay popular. Many actresses have myriad fan followers who follow them blindly. Celebrities always want their followers to observe them and follow them, due to this reason many celebrities have done plastic surgery for better physical appearance. For example, Micheal Jackson has done plastic surgery on his face multiple times that he completely changed his face as he was not happy with his look. It is better to get plastic surgery done if the body or face has visible marks on it to hide those.
On the contrary, this advancement is not appropriate for many people who have got their plastic surgery done. The only reason for this is that it negatively affects the body. Sometimes it turns into skin cancer or starts having wrinkles on the face. Excessive surgery often leads to loosening the part of the skin. For Example, Micheal Jackson's nose was not formed properly after several years of operation. This is to say that, humans are better naturally and an artificial look would not be a better option to go for.
In conclusion, although it is true that plastic surgery gives a new look to a person. It has its own side effects which cannot be eclipsed, therefore, it is better to say humans should live happily with their natural look.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, it is true, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91780821918 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49481541591 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541095890411 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3737549554 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.75 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.38176352705 251% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261749438809 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860011704192 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789177603131 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102142770421 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710481395497 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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