The number of people interested in cosmetic surgery is increasing in order to improve their physical appearance.Why do people go for operations to change the way of they look? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?
Improving physical beauty with plastic surgery has increased by myriad people.Owing to certain factors communities prefer to modify their look in order to make it perfect, the reasons will be enumerated in this essay. I however consider, though it is a positive development, the negative aspects cannot be ignored.
Two prime reasons can be attributed that why people go for cosmetic surgery. Firstly, as there are ample proffesions that required a good employee for example, an airhostes and an actor in film industry. Secondly, since in the competitive era, everyone wants to be an attractive, so that they can attract to every person towards themselves from the core of their heart with the help of personalted look.
The rise in the popularity of plastic surgery is considered positive for the following glaring reasons. The first aspect is that unquestionably, after operating cosmetic surgey it is not only enhance people' confidence but also help to percive them looking young. The other paramount benefit of the surgery is that if unfortunately, a person's beauty is dammaged due to any accident or acid attack and he may not be capable to look at himself in the mirror. So, definitley, in this respect, plastic surgery would blessing for such person to restore their first look.
Despite the above mentioned benefits, there has also some drawbacks of plastic surgery. To commence with the first negative aspect of this surgery that it effects on human's body because the tons of chemicals are included in cosmetics, which perhaps can lead to dangerous challenges on body such as allergy or cancer. What is more, sometimes being a clear apperance of human somewhere it creates ego in their mind, because they foreget to respect of those who have not a beautiful look.
To compendium, although cosmetic surgery is an indispensable for rebuild people' lives and self- esteem. However, the downsides cannot be neglected.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, for example, in fact, such as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15923566879 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78549385628 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601910828025 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4700231602 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.714285714 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237702530399 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779539370542 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562620430619 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127774070474 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363111052301 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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