Some people believe that healthy eating and the importance of healthy food should be taught in schools. Others say that parents should teach their kids about healthy food and diet. Discuss both vies and give your opinion with relevant example.
Teaching of eating healthy diets is imperative to children that ought to be provided in schools as per the consideration of some people as opposed to opponents who claim, parents are onus to tech regarding such a diet. Personally, I side with the former view. Both perspectives will be intended in the upcoming paragraphs.
Two glaring opinions of few people behind the importance of a healthy diet from institutes are enumerated following. Firstly, since school is a place where a pupil is capable of learning not only about his physical fitness but also regular diet seriously, providing the significance of healthy diet is must in schools. To cite an example, majority of children are deny their parents' matter owing to the devoid unscared as compared to teachers. Secondly, kids cannot receive proper guidelines for taking healthy food unless they learn from tutors. What is more, complete worthwhile facts of a healthy diet are learnt by students during a subject of physical science into the class curriculum.
Despite the above mentioned some people's views, there are others' who opine that giving importance to a good diet is a responsibility of parents. First of all, being a mother she is liable to feed healthy food to her toddlers at home. There are ample superior diets, for instance, fruits, milk and fresh vegetables. To add to it, such ingredients have better medical values namely, vitamins A, B, and D as well as minerals. Another view is that as in the present scenario, children prefer to eat junk food frequently, which leads to umpteen health hassels such as obesity and asthma. So, definitely, in this respect, parents are able to control their children to consume adulterated food due to the scarcity of hygiene.
To compendium and reiterate my opinion, although parents can give incentives about healthy food to their babies, I agree with those people who consider that children can be familiar with becoming a great dietician from schools.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'denied'.
Suggestion: denied
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, such as, as well as, first of all, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05538461538 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72625802892 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630769230769 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9051982323 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.533333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390865376022 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106171644089 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733916985473 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228947991644 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218561376219 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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