The number of people who are at a risk of serious health problem due to being overweight is increasing. What are the causes of overweighting and give the solution.
Booming technology revolution has crucial impact on today's society so, most of the people facing health related issues due to being overweight. There are the lot of reasons because of those people suffer to put on weight. Here I shall discuss my point of view related to reasons and solutions in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, the myriad reason of gaining weight is sedentary lifestyle. People do not have time to do exercise and support their health. Technology play a deplorable act in this matter. such as, household works are done by machines like washing machine, grinders, mixers. People do not need to do physical activity. furthermore ,the pace of life is very fast. No body has time to cook, so they are not able to consume healthy food. They eat processed or fast food. Additionally, these unhealthy foods become the reason of many diseases like cholesterol, diabetes, heart diseases, obesity, high blood pressure etc.
There are ample solutions which can control obesity. The first and most is physical exercise because exercise can control adipose tissues in body. One should go on a crash diet to keep up his or her body mass index. Watch what you eat how that a calorie-controlled diet must have an important role to help in weight loss. We should cut down fattening food. We must to take part in physical activities. In this way, any person can control the risks of obese.
In conclusion, we should use new technology gadgets and follow New life style but we also should not give the duty to technology to control our health. It is rightly said that health wealth. If we have good health then we can enjoy every moment of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, then, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81754385965 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57084058216 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638596491228 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1424491966 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.4090909091 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.9545454545 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108890716463 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0264343369971 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457713948848 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0677708220822 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485434840064 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.0946893788 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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