The crime rate nowadays is decreasing as compared to past due to technology which can prevent and solve crime.Do you agree or disagree?
Modern technology entered in every and each phase of life, so technology has vital part in every aspect of life. All the world is roaming around technology. How it is, it also affects crime related issues like with the help of modern gadgets and ideas, the crime rate is decreasing day by day. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall discuss about prevention and solutions of crime and my view-point as well.
To begin with, In advanced era, there are ample ways to prevent and solve crime. No one can think to do shoplifting, pick pocketing, traffic offences, mugger etc. The reason behind this control is that most of the shops, malls, public places, railway stations, airports etc have suvilliance cameras and hidden censors. All these equipment control all types of offences.
Moreover, due to these facilities, criminals have fear to catch red-handed, because all their bad actions are captured by hidden cameras. With these proofs, police and spies have the great evidence to punish any criminal, they are not able to do so, because there is also a technology to find them with the help of GPRS services. Furthermore, most of the houses and cars has siren locks, so thieves cannot able to theft. Additionally if any criminal try to lie, there are detectors which can detect the truth. Thus, no criminal can hide from the eyes of law.
To sum up, I am totally agree that with the help of technology, crime rate is decreasing today as compared to past. Technology is working as a booster for police, spies and investigation branches. They have modern equipment and new ideas to catch the criminals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, well, as to, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8795620438 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59534218456 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620437956204 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2930185485 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5625 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264794952939 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699313763286 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783116342011 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146955619738 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543308751902 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.