The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing. what is the reason for the growth in overweight people in society? How can this problem be solved?
Nowadays, with the advance of technology and changes in lifestyles, new problems have arisen in the society and commonly founded in rural area. Overweight is always a problem, it causes many diseases and serious health problems. There are plenty of excuses why people become overweight.
Two reasons could be listed down as the main cause for overweight, first, the excessive consumption of fatty food, also known as junk food. Living in a society where time is of overly importance, people tend to eat foods which are easy and quick to consume that contain high sugar and salt levels. For example chips, cola, noodles, are kinds of food that if consumed in sufficient quantity and quality will cause overweight. Secondly, the sedentary lifestyle which the current society lives in is another reason for this health condition. People travelling in vehicles, using escalators, avoiding every task which needs physical exertion has made them lazy and unhealthy. Lack of hobbies also makes people spend their leisure time just to watch TV or surfing internet.
To overcome this problem, there are several things that we can do. Firstly, consume healthy foods. Nowadays, there are so many catering or restaurant that serve an organic and healthy foods, fruits can also be made as healthy snacks than consume potato chips or chocolate candy. Secondly, the government should offer healthy area like car free day, or park so people can spend their time to do exercise or go on an excursion. To decrease bad effects of modern lifestyle, people also can change their daily activities like taking bicycle to traveling around, and choose to take stairs rather than escalator or lift.
In conclusion, the numbers of overweight people are increasing year on year. However we can solve the problem by consuming healthy foods, and change our habits by doing exercise every weekend.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 124, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun catering seems to be countable; consider using: 'many caterings'.
Suggestion: many caterings
...e healthy foods. Nowadays, there are so many catering or restaurant that serve an organic and...
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Line 9, column 141, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'restaurants'?
Suggestion: restaurants
...Nowadays, there are so many catering or restaurant that serve an organic and healthy foods...
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Line 13, column 78, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ght people are increasing year on year. However we can solve the problem by consuming h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1737704918 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48814226312 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639344262295 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.625 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309210118455 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0972331442638 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567406797107 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188401269108 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448359365047 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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