As the number of people who live in cities continues to increase, the number of children who are raised in cities also has increased. Some people believe that raising a child in a large city brings many advantages. Meanwhile, other people claim that it has many drawbacks for the development and welfare of children. Discuss both views and provide your opinion.
In today’s world, people have a tendency to settle down in urban areas. While a number of people argue that children who grow up in big cities have a variety of advantages, some people believe that it still remains a source of controversy in the maturity of children in the long term.
On the one hand, it is definitely true that rural cities are the best choice of parents to give birth and raise their children. Firstly, the educational system plays a vital role in a child's life so with a qualified educational system, there is a benefit on shaping a child's personality and values. For example, children are talented at imitating such as behaviors or manners. If they have a chance to approach formal manners in their early age, this helps to reflect on their future characteristics. Secondly, living in the urban areas apparently develops the habit of adaptability in children. Life in big cities is updated every second so people have to adapt and blend themselves to catch up with the flow of life.
On the other hand, some people would argue that raising children in urban areas may have detrimental effects as well. City children are often required to fully develop skills and abilities. For instance, students who study in a school for the gifted must master their strength on one particular subject and pursue good grades on the other one as well. Furthermore, pollution is one of the most concerned problems while immigrating to big cities. Compared to the countryside, the air quality index reported that rural places always stand on the top which is determined as an unhealthy group.
In conclusion, the benefits outweigh the disadvantages in terms of raising one child in large areas. When it comes to city life, there are drawbacks but a child could take advantage of the educational system and adaptability skill.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89423076923 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72516390824 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557692307692 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9850262896 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.8 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291021447333 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866514749237 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805591358874 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183411574702 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643381678434 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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