As a result of the increasing number of city residents, many children now are brought up in cities. Although this may lead to certain problems to children, it can also be adventageous for child development.
On the one hand, there are several disadvantages of raising children in cities. Children in cities are more susceptible to bad effects cause by pollution. Not only air pollution but water pollution and noise pollution can also adversely affect their health. A child's safety is another concern for parents in a city. This is because children are exposed to many dangers as crime rate in city is often much higher. Moreover, living in cities with higher population means children have to deal with a higher degree of competitiveness and academic pressure. This puts children in a stressful lifestyle which is not good for their mental development.
Despite the drawbacks, raising children in cities can be beneficial in some aspects. Firstly, children in cities can access better education. This is because schools in urban areas are more well-invested and have larger budgets which allows them to install facilites including laboratories or libraries. Another plus point is that cities offers a wide range of ways to approach knowledge since children can not only learn at school but also broaden their mind by participating in various extracurricular programs or going to cultural sites such as museums, galleries, zoos and aquariums. Moreover, living in a diversely populated society like cities can be a privilege. Children in a multicutural environment will likely be more culturally awared and more open-minded than rural children.
In conclusion, the advantages and disadvantages of children growing up in cities can be debatable. However, I am inclined to believe that the benefits that cities offer children in the aspects of education and cultural awareness makes it a wiser choice despite the drawbacks.
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- As the number of people who live in cities continues to increase the number of children who are raised in cities also has increased Some people believe that raising a child in a large city brings many advantages Meanwhile other people claim that it has ma 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28758169935 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99783480896 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575163398693 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2444256062 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1764705882 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88235294118 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246279251843 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907956780405 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062430654795 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167110872712 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239279706137 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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