obesity was once considered a disease of adults,however,it is becoming increasingly common among children.Why do you think is happening?what can be done to help children stay healthy?

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...ess and healty.The can root that in few days youth should not like a fat but also un...
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... not like a fat but also unfitness body.However, teenager always think than obesity ha...
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...s health compare to the restaurant food.After that,in my point of view, youngster can...
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... youngster can need health in whole life .lastly,kids can only eat home food if th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, lastly, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, i think, no doubt, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59447004608 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.68972221047 2.80592935109 131% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.663594470046 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 20.2975951904 266% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.3641936831 49.4020404114 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 303.5 106.682146367 284% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.25 20.7667163134 261% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 34.75 7.06120827912 492% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 37.0 5.01903807615 737% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0844555731562 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530584813165 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0259130645758 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0411746742368 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248562917569 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.0 13.0946893788 244% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 8.21 50.2224549098 16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 11.3001002004 226% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.03 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.32 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.1190380762 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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