The table below shows the number of medals won by the top ten countries in the London 2012 Olympic games.
The tabular chart depicts that information about representation the number of medals won in the London 2012 Olympic games.It is give ten nations in the chart.
it is clearly seen that rank by gold London in 2012 Olympic game was upsurge gold achievement by united states.Hence,silver and Bronze was equal ratio to united states.Therefore, united states it had higher proportion on the chart.
On the other other,secondly was increased percentage to China in 2012.After that,Germany and France was similar rank by gold but also silver had near rose to France.Moreover,
in 2012 Australia had very lowest number by gold instead Hungary had fallen down to silver and Bronze.
To sum up,in 2012 united states was increased Olympic games
medal table as well as it had fallen up number in the chart.Thus,Hungary had total reduced number of rank of gold.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 723.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 139.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20143884892 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43363162301 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27765552237 2.65546596893 123% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575539568345 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 220.5 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.9733967262 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 180.75 112.824112599 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.75 22.9334400587 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 23.5 5.23603664747 449% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 1.69756097561 1296% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223717062397 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16139839396 0.103423049105 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110481092184 0.0843802449381 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125380096333 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100406949016 0.0819641961636 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 13.2329268293 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 61.2550243902 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.3012195122 161% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.4329268293 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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