Older people think that the world is better place to live when they were young. Do you agree or disagree?.
21st century has changed our lives and the way we are living. it made our society a
"technological civilized society" which is very good for our growth. Grey people have opinion that planet was better place when they were young. I also consider that world
was much more better place to live in the past as compared to now.
First and foremost reason for this is increase in the pollution and population. the times
when people were young was so different from nowadays. There were no such problems
like pollution and global warming due to which environment of current days is getting
effected. In addition, increase in population is also effecting the lives of masses. with the
increase in the population demand for new houses is also increasing because of which
land is becoming unavailable. Growth in population is also major reason behind huge
traffic jams due to which pollution is also rising.
Another noteworthy reason for this is increase in generation gap and lack in cultural
values. In early times people used to spend their time with their family and
friends but nowadays no one has time for anyone because most of the people are busy
in their respective working schedules. They are becoming money-minded and want to live alone. Furthermore, today's young generation is ignoring the cultural values. Young generation is adapting western culture and they think that culture has become obsolete.
They do not want to follow the old rituals and cultural values and this enhanced the
strain in family relationships.
On the other hand, technology transformed the living standards of the people. lifestyle
of people is improved and developed just because of technology and it leads people towards new horizons. Many facilities are available like computers, internet and mobile
phones which made our life more easy. However, I still believe that despite of these
developments world was much better place in the past.
To recapitulate, advanced technologies made our lives so simple and easy. People should
accept the changes but not on the cost of relationships and lives.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'in addition', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.265957446809 0.247107183377 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.170212765957 0.155533422707 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.109042553191 0.0946595960268 115% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0505319148936 0.0501214627716 101% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0452127659574 0.0437548338989 103% => OK
Prepositions: 0.117021276596 0.122226691241 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0398936170213 0.0403226058552 99% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74946481823 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0212765957447 0.0326793684256 65% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0664893617021 0.0861772015684 77% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00265957446809 0.021408717616 12% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0186170212766 0.011925033212 156% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2124.0 1933.35771543 110% => OK
No of words: 342.0 316.048096192 108% => OK
Chars per words: 6.21052631579 6.12580529183 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20517956788 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.374269005848 0.374742101984 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.269005847953 0.28420135186 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.184210526316 0.203846283523 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.122807017544 0.137316102897 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74946481823 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.037074148 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535087719298 0.56093040696 95% => OK
Word variations: 57.3116627792 60.7387585426 94% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0891783567 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.5454545455 20.7743622355 75% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8541911174 49.517814964 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5454545455 127.492653851 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5454545455 20.7743622355 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.454545454545 0.814263465372 56% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38877755511 501% => There are something wrong with the essay format.
Language errors: 17.0 3.99599198397 425% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 42.4460393408 49.1944974215 86% => OK
Elegance: 1.59 1.69124875643 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296797535484 0.332605444948 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.10001334871 0.102741220458 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0921667585887 0.0668466124924 138% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.672494697064 0.534860350844 126% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.285466305833 0.148594505496 192% => Sentences are changing often in a paragraphs.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10874659039 0.134430193775 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785272001018 0.0742795772207 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.0868817106942 0.324371583561 27% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0961894109267 0.0638462369009 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985423438256 0.228012699653 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698813094545 0.058150111329 120% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.68436873747 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 16.0 5.90881763527 271% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 22.0 10.4468937876 211% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.