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One long distance flight consumes fuel which a car uses in several years time but they cause the same amount of pollution so some people think that we should discourage non essential flights such as tourist travel rather than to limit the use of cars to w

It is undoubtedly true that one long-way flight consumes fuel way more than that a car in several years does, but this is also true that at the end same amount of pollution in caused by both. Keeping this in mind, it is a widely supposed notion that non-essential flights should be discontinued instead of cars. I completely disaccord with the given view and I shall elaborate my side in the given paragraphs.

To begin, the tourism sector of a country is considered to be the backbone of an economy and plays a major role in boosting country's economic stability.For example, Tourism is considered to be the third pillar of the economy of Mauritius after manufacturing and agricultural sector. It contributes about 15% to the GDP of the island. Therefore, if the tourist travel flights would be discouraged, one huge source of income and job creation would be lost in different parts of the world and the economy would decline.

Also,travelling internationally by cars is an unfeasible option because of the water and forests boundaries between countries. Moreover discouraging cars instead of flights is an relevant option because fuels used in flights are more petrolium-based and because of being synthetically flourished, they produce less pollution in amount also and in quality too it is not that harmful; whereas, cars are major pollution contributors as they emit more toxic pollutants such as carbon and nitrogen oxides. For example, the recent pollution statics of switzerland said that the major proportion of its pollution was created by private cars which was about 80% , whereas just 2% was caused by the flights and rest was comprised by industries and public transport.

To conclude, in my opinion private cars should be discontinued rather than flights as the pollution caused by flights is way more bearable than that of cars and also flights saves alot of time and is an convenient option too.

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... also flights saves alot of time and is an convenient option too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, third, whereas, for example, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05993690852 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97895523314 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533123028391 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.1162309259 49.4020404114 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.4 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.7 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353556055919 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119478492916 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108927365246 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208693880865 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0956092832146 0.056905535591 168% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, third, whereas, for example, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments