Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that it will replace face-to-face education soon. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is believed by some that online education has numerous advantages, hence it will replace face-to-face study, however I and others opine that common education is unplaceable. There are various reasons behind this above mentioned statement.
On the one hand, some masses opine that e-learning has so many benefits. The first and foremost benefit is that pupils can learn anything at any place in a short period of time. Students can search outdated information and they can get it in a few seconds. For example, many applications are available such as youtube, google where they can easily get information. Secondly, not only scholars can get information but also they can increase their knowledge. Because, learners seen different advertisements related to education during the online study. For instance, when they search information, they get wide range of material over there. Thus, e-learning is becoming more famous, so it will replace face-to-face study.
On the other hand, I opine that traditional study is irreplaceable because there are many reasons behind this. Firstly, whenever children face any doubt they can easily put any question from their teachers, so scholars can clear their doubts and solve their difficulties, For example, in the classroom everyone shows own opinion, hence learners can understand by any method. In addition to this, traditional education is best for children future, because in the classroom they do competition with another scholars to get top score, so their future will become more bright due to the competitive skills.
In conclusion, I reiterate that traditional study is irreplaceable due to above all reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... learn anything at any place in a short period of time. Students can search outdated informati...
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Line 3, column 458, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...also they can increase their knowledge. Because, learners seen different advertisements...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39846743295 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88048718822 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582375478927 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.378952036 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.642857143 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1428571429 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26273020143 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967222320941 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111534028297 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166171377005 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081421176589 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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