As we know nowadays all of the world are suffering from coronavirus pandemic. Therefore all works altered to online form and also shopping. I say that advantages and disadvantages way of it on the following essay.
Firstly, I partially agree with this statement. Online shopping is comfortable and easy for us. If you will buy something you should not go out. You can purchase your mobile phone, you will choose something which you liked then order it to sales assistant by internet. I can say that it is unsafe for everyone. However if you buy something more amount an extra thing is given for you good selling.
On the other hand shopping of online maybe unreliable. Because you do not see something original with your eyes and do not touch it. You don't know its quality or these goods maybe cheaper than others in the market. For example, if you bought something from online then that was unfit for or did not like itscquality. You do not give back it.
To sum up, it is better to trade in such a way that it is convenient for everyone to buy. Because you may not like to use it if you can not buy something that is quality and desirable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, for example, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 1615.20841683 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 209.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47846889952 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50332074958 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.4698811099 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.5 106.682146367 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.0625 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0708287944093 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372497707963 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811365192678 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0416933206783 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029781237172 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 13.0946893788 47% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.82 12.4159519038 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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