Only government action can solve housing shortages in big cities. To what extent do you agrre or disagree?
Homelessness in large cities has become a serious issue, leading some to believe that only governments can address this problem. T disagree with this statement as I believe that even if the government may have a primary role in solving this issue, others can also contribute significantly to tackling the problem.
Government action is indeed essential to resolve the shortage of houses in major cities. One way in which this is achieved is by having the legal power to ensure fair practices in the housing market and promote responsible development. For instance, they can levy higher taxes on the ownership of multiple properties, which discourages such practices and this leaves more affordable houses for lower-income residents. Additionally, the government can implement measures to increase the supply of affordable housing. For example, they can enact zoning laws to encourage development and finance the reconstruction of affordable homes.
Nevertheless, I believe that the complexity needs collaboration among multiple stakeholders, particularly private entities and non-profit organizations. Regarding the former, the private sector has resources that can be needed to manage the construction of affordable housing projects. Thus, with appropriate incentives such as tax breaks or expedited permit processes, the government can involve private corporations in addressing housing shortages.
In conclusion, while the government may play a central role in tackling homelessness in large urban areas, I disagree with the view that no other party can contribute. In my opinion, the lack of housing in cities can only be effectively solved with collective efforts that involve private companies and non-profit organizations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74319066148 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23636246411 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587548638132 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9122559423 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255439872111 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0969284937059 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595169552578 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152279120916 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366031476353 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.45 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.