only Money can bring happiness.
to what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, our society has been changed and develop a lot of modern lifestyles. To enjoy those facilities masses need money or any kind thing which use for trad. A group of people have thought happiness depends on money. This essay will illustrate how money is behind happiness, although something is bought with help money. I partially agree with this statement.
To begin with, money brings equipment+ of happiness. These days, peoples have a bundle of desires which only buy with money. For example, a man is living in hot weather where the temperature is higher than his ability if he has money then he is able to buy air condition that gives some nice feeling. In addition, hunger is a serious issue in some countries where they need food but without money, they are not able to eat it. Also some kind of medical problem to solve need money. Like in some poor countries, they are usually not going to the hospital because they do not have money. While with we can not buy everything.
There is a lot of things which can not get by money. In our society that made by relationships and that is not available for sale. For instance, the family which is the cause of our happiness, we can not buy but we buy some products for our family. secondly, friends who are partners of our joyful childhood however we cannot get with money.
In conclusion, funds are used to buy facility which gives happiness and also improve our living style. Conversely, cash does not buy some significant relation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 427, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...out money, they are not able to eat it. Also some kind of medical problem to solve n...
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Line 2, column 586, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ospital because they do not have money. While with we can not buy everything. There ...
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Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
...ut we buy some products for our family. secondly, friends who are partners of our joyful...
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Line 3, column 267, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...ducts for our family. secondly, friends who are partners of our joyful childhood howeve...
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Line 4, column 160, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...does not buy some significant relation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1236.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64661654135 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43749379412 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2034580592 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.6666666667 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7777777778 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173014458572 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619879154483 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444067377039 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0965841935406 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450542959354 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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