The only way to improve the safety on our own roads is to have stricter punishment for driving offenders. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Accident rates increasing day by day due to, traffic, careless driving, poor infrastructure of roads and many more. Some believe that imposing the stern penalty on careless drivers to enhance the safety road transportation. While this approach can be proved beneficial up to some extent, this is far from being the best method. Other methods are much superior to this idea.
On the one hand, it is true that that stricter laws such as heavy fines, imprisonment and many more are the reduce the rate of accidents and traffic. For example, drinking alcohol and using a phone while driving, which leads to unfortunate incidents on roads. However, due to light punishments, people don’t follow the rules. Government authority should change the punishments into heavy fines and imprisonments, then people will consider twice before the breaking rules.
On the other hand, severe punishments are not the only way to reduce driving crimes. There are other ideas should be applied to this situation. Firstly, the government should do a campaign on safety driving which through people aware of the misfortune on roads. Secondly, the authority could make a video on awareness while driving on roads. For example, in Ahmedabad city, their government makes a rule for who is driving careless and not following the traffic rule they have to come compulsory for three days to learn driving lessons and rules in the traffic police station.
In conclusion, stern penalizing can be helpful at some extent however doing campaign and make video on safe driving would also helpful to reduce sever misfortune on roads.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...y fines, imprisonment and many more are the reduce the rate of accidents and traffic. For ...
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Line 9, column 521, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to drive'.
Suggestion: to drive
...come compulsory for three days to learn driving lessons and rules in the traffic police...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21072796935 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65483790388 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8023140077 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1428571429 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172298041515 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534983635 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512933144573 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930946663554 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056318949268 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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