The only way to solve the increasing crime rate of young offenders is to teach parents better parenting skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today's modern world, the criminal actions of young people have become a major concern in society. Thus, the vast majority of the population believes that the key to reducing these actions is to teach the guardians of children how to be better parents. Personally, I strongly agree with this statement and this essay will discuss several reasons explaining my opinion.
To begin, according to ancient Greeks, the family is the smallest model of society. It has rules which everyone has to follow. However, if a child does not come across to straight rules while it is still young, then as a teenager will not follow the legislation of the society. Several examples of teenagers participating in minor thefts could be given. That is why the highly educated personalities of our world have to show to parents, and especially to young parents, better parenting skills.
To continue, the absence of the parental image in a child's life, nowadays, it is very common because of the way that the lifestyle has changed. A big part of the population works 8 or sometimes 12 hours on a daily basis, a fact which has reduced the time in which the members of a family can be in touch. Despite that, parents with the right methods of communication can void this absence on a daily basis. For instance, after school and work, a 15 min conversation amongst parents and children, can make the children open themselves and the parents to understand if something troubles their children.
To conclude, unfortunately, the rate of criminal behaviors by youngsters has increased over the last few years. Although, while others try to solutions on this phenomenon in wrong aspects of our life, better and more concentrated education on patents might make this situation better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, then, thus, while, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96621621622 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75850335502 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601351351351 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4097002903 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169142825898 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483166836709 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441856110773 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0876569131039 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157330788728 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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