It is believed that the only way to tackle the growing crime rate of young offenders is to impart better parenting skills. I disagree with the opinion as I believe that other solutions can expand the crime in children.
the most crucial cause is not to nurture from the parent instead of that is the lack of resources and poverty. Firstly, parents always care for a child’s enlargement. They tried to expand the positive skills when the children were young to their child imitated by the behavior of the parent. Admittedly, no one wants their children to be criminals. Consequently, it is agreed that teaching better parenting skills will not help to control the crime of adults.
On top of that, I think the other way of juvenile delinquent a crime is resource scarcity to fulfill their wants. Extending the wealth and technology to effect of youth to get these they must earn money. Activities like thieving, pickpocketing and stealing are the easiest to achieve things. Now let is analyze. for instance, last week in Ha Noi capital, A sixteen years old was caught because he was thieved the smartphone of a stranger. When the police asked, he was replying ‘I don’t have money and cant afford my life. So I commit a crime’
To conclude, crime rates among adults are increasing rapidly. I strongly believed that so as to address the situation teaching parenting skill is not true since parents usually find the way of upbringing better for children instead of the government should be concerned about causing crimes that is a lack of resources because of poverty and lead to deal with it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, so, as to, for instance, i think, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82909090909 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60907507122 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596363636364 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4674887836 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5333333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336238764401 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989720147882 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115415411487 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212433858598 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103760454634 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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