In order to be successful in sport, some people think you have to be physically strong. Others say that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Sport is one of the top activity, which has appeared for thousand of years, bring many positive effect to people. Since sport is competition, it is the place for people to show their best abilities to compete the opponents. Some people think that physical fitness is the key point to make people success in sport. However, others claim that mental attitude is more important for sport players. From my point of view, mental strength is the main reason to bring people on the top in sport.
Firstly, the unbeaten mind is the factor to separate professional and amateur people. People who are the stars in their sport have the world-class expertise that are not very different between each competitors. The matter they suffer from stress due to last result or the pressure come from other competitors. For example, in car racing, players have the highest skill and conscious head is the matter classify that team win or lose. They need to consider when they need attack or defending their order that not put them in dangerous condition. Moreover, in boxing, competitors have the same weight that mean they have same physical strength, the winner is the people who has better performance through their cool mind Secondly, mental stability will make people decide which strategy and technique is better in every situation. For instance, in football, team with better strategy and position while playing is the winning team which need the stable mind.
On the other hand, physical strength also has the important role in success. This idea come from the sport that need much strength such as sprinting or wrestling, physical strength like acceleration or power is more considering. Special meals and training courses are apply to achieve the peak stamina and agility. Moreover, better strength help athletes has better endurance when they participate in the sports that are long lasting. For instance, long distance jogging, mountain climbing, long distance swimming, etc. are some sports need better fitness and toughness.
In conclusion, although better physical strength bring the physical effect that will beat the competitors mental strength will help them choose the better reaction in every situation, chance to perform all of their abilities and motivation to overcome the fear of failure - the ingredients that bring success and joyful in sport.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...nd position while playing is the winning team which need the stable mind. On the...
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... Special meals and training courses are apply to achieve the peak stamina and agility...
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Suggestion:
...tivation to overcome the fear of failure - the ingredients that bring success and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1971.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17322834646 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50501128726 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503937007874 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.3726561169 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.736842105 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0526315789 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47368421053 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344225471087 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107809154567 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100687332438 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217646421271 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112252383724 0.056905535591 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.