In these days, the traffic congestion is probably the most controversial issues. It is argued that the authorities should release the heavy tax on a driver who owns a private vehicle and invest the money in developing public transit. This trend would create certain benefits but there will also be some drawbacks.
On the one hand, it is clear that taxing on the private car would bring about several advantages. One evident strength is that it could decrease a large number of vehicles on the road. In other words, instead of commuting by car, the employee could drive a bike or take public transportation. It is claimed that it could contribute to reducing air pollution in the metropolitan. Another reason is that it would help improve the old public transportation. This is because the governments invest the tax returns on developing public transit's facility. Consequently, the citizens would be more satisfied with public transportation's condition and take it more frequently.
On the other hand, there are some obvious disadvantages that would arise. First and foremost, there is a possibility that the car enterprise revenue will drop drastically. This is because plenty of sales will be affected by the heavy tax. This could lead to a huge loss of financial situation. Second, it is probable that it may occur an intense politic-related protest. For instance, the yellow vest protest in France happened in 2018, due to the increasing price of fuel.
In conclusion, there are plus points to heavy tax regarding reduction vehicle and improvement of old-fashion public vehicle. However, the downside would emerge consequently in terms of financial loss and political protest.
- Some people prefer to live in small family units, while others think it is better to live in large family groups. Discuss both of views and give your opinion. 73
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- In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. 73
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- In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 145, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...dent strength is that it could decrease a large number of vehicles on the road. In other words, i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, may, regarding, second, so, for instance, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19485294118 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00298789717 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566176470588 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.4544119781 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.5 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1111111111 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27777777778 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18100026475 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512007382208 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535713434253 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102693883132 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046230095909 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.23 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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