In order to study at university, students are required to pay expensive tuition fees. Not all students can afford them, so some people think that university education should be free for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
These days, to join a university in some states, you need to spend large sums of money. As not all students can fulfil these high financial requirements, a proposal of making higher education free for all might be healthy, and its implementation would bring countless benefits to both individual and society. Therefore, I strongly agree with this suggestion.
Firstly, allowing all students to join universities without fees would open doors for more students who might become more effective in their societies. In other words, some poor families might include bright and active members who could not continue their further education because of monetary issues. If these smart youth had a chance to join a college, they might have helped their nation in a better way than other rich students. A good illustration here is that in Saudi Arabia, we have recently started to witness lots of Saudi doctors, engineers and professors in nearly all fields. This is because of the fact that education in Saudi Arabia is completely free, so all citizens are taking their chances.
Secondly, applying no fees higher education for everyone will more likely promote the concept of the equality between different social classes, which, in turn, has many advantages. For instance, feeling the equality between impoverished and wealthy inhabitants might enhance patriotism, which is something that most countries seek. Furthermore, it helps the general psychological states of the residents. This is because feeling that you have the same equal rights as your fellow citizens have a great positive impact on one’s psychology so that they work and live well.
By way of conclusion, it is obvious from what has been discussed above that making university studies free for everyone might have a number of positives, such as society prosperity, enhancing patriotism, acting and working in a better mood due to the presence of the sense of equality. Consequently, I undoubtedly support that all higher education become free for everyone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 598, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
...rofessors in nearly all fields. This is because of the fact that education in Saudi Arabia is completely...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29411764706 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78912489272 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609907120743 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3598933521 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.142857143 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0714285714 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204509587857 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671143240883 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560430803777 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127806590836 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529639562144 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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