over-fishing has become a very common practice in many countries. what do you think are the effects of ever-fishing?
use your own knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence
Current hobbies of plenty people are fishing persistently, so that it turns to be the ordinary activity. Vast countries extend this activity into television programme, consideringly most of audience are being interested. Notwithstanding, I also see the other sides of over-fishing especially in a downside to prove over-fishing responsibility.
First and foremost, fishing is normally useful to purpose in main profession like sailor. They intend to fulfil people consumptions and national income, likewise, traditional market system. Moreover, newest issue related to this topic is changing the function. From live supporting to become the favorite thing. Although seems positive, it provides malfunction unexpectedly. To demonstrate, many suspects are illegally sailing in harmful ways. Regarding to this, they intend to produce personal profit without saving sea heritage. Actually they are responsible for damaging the environment.
By the same token, over-fishing beats addicted feeling in several generations. People would be thinking of about exploring their interest, yet never realised the impact. The way fish-catcher hunting was quite annoying, such as bombing or caged sea animals. However, dislodging other organisms is truly unaware deed. Even though the Government often warn and prohibit this harassment technic, but no one of the suspects are willing to response. Instead, the board is setting the strict rules and dispose the suitable punishment under this. Consideringly, many societies are stand for the Government to plan a whole preventive.
To recapitulate, Over-fishing has a basic form in sailing and explain hobby. But in fact, it turns to be damaging wonderful biota, because of their sustainably process. Although, The Government are worthy needed to execute the regulations, society have to support this planning.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 199, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the newest'.
Suggestion: , the newest
...ise, traditional market system. Moreover, newest issue related to this topic is changing...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, likewise, moreover, regarding, so, in fact, such as, by the same token
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.80882352941 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13831936598 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.698529411765 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.7879914751 49.4020404114 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.2380952381 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9523809524 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09523809524 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141610395618 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0370730759213 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045543900508 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0845463243293 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201638000003 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.53 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.5 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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