Overpopulation in many major urban centres around the world is a major problem. What are the cause of this? How can this problem be solved?
The increasing number of citizens that live in different part of countries lead to several detrimental effect. There are some factors that make this phenomenon occur and solutions in order to overcome this issue.
To begin with, the number of migration people are rising time to time, which make several place become overpopulated. One of the illustrations that show the epitome of this activity is most of teenagers who have a family or friends outside their countries tend to move to join them. By doing this, they indirectly manufacture some impediments to countries, such as the decreasement of healthiness, the increasement of criminal activities and the major problem was overpopulated countries. Another reason that made this occur, the tourism allures people to come. It become the most popular attraction that gathered myriad travellers from other countries. Furthermore, tourist that travel to our country have no responsibility and stay in that country for several years, therefore the overpopulation will occur easily.
Moreover, there are some abatements that help to reduce this issue. First of all, government can make a program that help people to move from overpopulated site to a place that have lack of population. By doing this, they still can meet their family or travel to tourism places that have a good scene and facilities. Another solution to diminish this event is make a limitation for citizens who want to travel to another countries. Airport office can help government to curb several traveller and refurbish their vacation place which located in other places. It really beneficial in order to lessen the overcrowded place.
To recapitulate, overpopulation is the most crucial problem that happens to a lot of countries. Even though it lead to deterioration of healthiness and the increasing of criminal action, we can against this by making program that can curb the occupant that live there.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun place seems to be countable; consider using: 'several places'.
Suggestion: several places
...ple are rising time to time, which make several place become overpopulated. One of the illust...
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Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the teenagers') or simply say ''most teenagers''.
Suggestion: most of the teenagers; most teenagers
...at show the epitome of this activity is most of teenagers who have a family or friends outside th...
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Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
... the tourism allures people to come. It become the most popular attraction that gather...
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Line 5, column 476, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun traveller seems to be countable; consider using: 'several travellers'.
Suggestion: several travellers
...port office can help government to curb several traveller and refurbish their vacation place whic...
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Line 7, column 112, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'leads'?
Suggestion: leads
...s to a lot of countries. Even though it lead to deterioration of healthiness and the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, really, so, still, therefore, such as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28246753247 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95732529424 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516233766234 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9751022289 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.6875 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186956677701 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627651049707 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541812523466 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12248971071 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264242202276 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.