Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems.
Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems
The problems caused by sharp population growth of metropolitan area are much more ubiquitous in a multitude of countries over the world, and both governments and individuals take responsibility to address these issues.
Overpopulation triggers a vast number of adverse long-term consequences for economic growth, development and poverty reduction. One of them is an excessive increase in unemployment rate, which could result in enhancement of lawlessness. Moreover, conflicts and wars could also be a frightening outcome of overpopulation that disrupts people’s lives in both densely populated cities and remote villages, especially in some developing countries. Hence, the death of innocent civilians is obviously incoming.
The government is in charge of mitigating these detrimental consequences. They should take management of population growth limit and let the citizens to curb their childbirth at reasonable numbers. Law is also in need of adjustment, which makes rules more strict in order to have conducive effects on residents’ awareness of sexual activities. Specifically, the government should set a tax on the locals who give birth to more than two children and create commercials in order to educate them about protective items during night time.
To completely solve the problems, the collaboration of individuals is obviously in demand. All the citizens need to perceive the difficult situation and be aware of what they are doing. They must also make effective use of birth control methods and take responsibility to guide those around them about the adverse effects of the increase of population growth.
To summarize, people should never take overpopulation in urban areas insignificantly for its detrimental consequences. However, if the government and individuals share a collective responsibility, the solutions will soonly get in practice.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71684587814 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36149891841 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616487455197 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.22617097 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.928571429 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143716367799 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444634899708 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460981965687 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0812925192606 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506560669037 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...esponsibility to address these issues. Overpopulation triggers a vast number of...
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...ocent civilians is obviously incoming. The government is in charge of mitigatin...
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...ucive effects on residents’ awareness of sexual activities. Specifically, the gov...
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...t protective items during night time. To completely solve the problems, the co...
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... of the increase of population growth. To summarize, people should never take o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71684587814 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36149891841 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616487455197 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.22617097 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.928571429 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143716367799 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444634899708 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460981965687 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0812925192606 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506560669037 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.