Parents should encourage children to spend less time studying and more time doing physical activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is frequently stated that guardian should stimulate their offspring to spend motr sparetime in athletics. From personaly prior experience, this essay fully agree, with reason is when sitting for too long will provoke osteorthritis snd so exercise is the best way to improve health and immune system.
The first reaon pointed out that too focus on studying with saldom amusement will lead to osteorthritis and muscles is numb. Sitting for a long time in one pose creat pressure on bones anf decline movement of blood cells making muscles numd. To cite an example, when stretching body or lying down will hear sound of the bones clearly. Morever, it can also result in more different bone diseases and slow development for childs.
On the other hand, do physical activity will encourage blood circulation for the improvement of health and immune system. Through boosting movement of blood cells while spontaneouly ameliorating metabolism for better absorbtion of nutrients. Thus, creating resistance which is beneficial for immune system and health, morever, is the development of body as appearance and brain. Children who play soccer or voleyball for specific instance have a tall appearence and seldom being gotten illness.
in brief, study too much can lead to osteorthritis on youngster and their health and immune system can enhanced by undertaking atheletics . It is demonstrated that parent should encourage their offsprings to spend more time for physical activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, thus, while, in brief, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37768240343 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81286518234 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635193133047 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.5227295214 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.416666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149286858665 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605564788183 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0914508383326 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939608153375 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661647496337 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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