Parents want to achieve balance between family and career but only a few manage to achieve it. What do you think is the reason? Discuss possible solutions and provide examples.
<p class="MsoNormal">To achieve a balance between family and career is a desire to
most of the parents, but remains unrealistic for many. A strong compulsion to
earn money to sustain in the society is the main reason for failing to achieve
the balance. This particular problem can be avoided by finding ways to save
money and allocating appropriate time to both the family and for the career.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Parents being pushed into ever running money earning life have
imbalance between their family life and career. While the inflation is pinned
down for the necessity to earn more money, disproportionate expenditure of time
at work and home also adds insult to the inury. For example, when both the
parent of the family work three jobs a month to make the ends meet, more the number
of hours they spend away from personal life and lesser the time to plan for
their children. Consequently, an imbalance often leading to progression in
career at the cost of ignorance towards family.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">However, cutting down the unnecessary expenses may allow parents
to work less, which in-turn provide some extra time to spend with family
members. Careful expenditure of salary or wages with little savings spares the
breadwiner of the family a relief from extra jobs. This decompresses the mind
and gives a relaxed situation for a quality family time. For instance, money
spent of entertainments can be cut down to half and diverted to the medical or
food expenses; thereby, reducing the need to work extra hours.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"> To conclude, most of
the parents find it difficult to attain a balance between family and career.
Inevitable need to earn money due to inflation made them to excel in career but
fail in family although proper planning to save money and time may root out
this cause through several ways.<o:p></o:p></p>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57049180328 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.58181442016 2.80592935109 163% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554098360656 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.210159463 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.9 106.682146367 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.38176352705 571% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145475662864 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673735326531 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470662053765 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0451684860485 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636304652234 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.62 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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