As parts of education, students should spend a period of time living in another country to learn its knowledge and cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree
It is believed by some people that education should involve students overseas learning. While I fervently advocate that students do not have to pay attention to their studying abroad unless they have enough understanding of their own country customs and academic knowledge
It is essential that going abroad requires a variety of knowledge, and students must prepare abundant of available understanding, especially to the local languages, for their traveling. Over the last few decades, the rate of illiteracy due to the language barriers has escalated as lack knowledge-students are endeavoring to go abroad with a hope to be one step ahead who do not have chances to study overseas. For this reason, this method can have repercussions for all concerned, instead, they can stay in their own nation in order not to struggle in education.
On the other hand, knowing about the mother country's customs is fundamental for a person who wants to study in another country. In the interim, students are still in the developing stage, which means that they are not ready to interfere with foreign customs while having not discovered their local rituals yet. Hence, overseas education is not exclusive to students.
By way of conclusion, unless students have academic knowledge and understanding about their local customs, they do not have to study abroad.
- Some people believe that the best way to encourage children that have a healthy diet at school and some people believe that parents should teach them to have a healthy diet Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
- Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside Other believe that there are health benefits of living in cities Discuss both views and give your opinions 73
- Nowadays more and more women decide to have children later in their life why Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 84
- The use of mobile phones should be banned in public places like libraries and shops To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- Today many countries import food from different parts of the world Is this a positive or negative development 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, so, still, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1134.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22580645161 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92335208033 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585253456221 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.2328751054 49.4020404114 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.75 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.125 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124195947863 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636388553921 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366268667068 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0903765394928 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367307821765 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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