In the past, buildings often reflected the culture of a society, but today all modern buildings look alike and cities throughout the world are becoming more and more similar. What do you think is the reason for this, and is it a good thing or a bad thing?
In the past different countries had their own different architectural character, but nowadays the design of buildings becomes increasingly similar. This essay will analyze the reasons of this trend, and provide an overall opinion.
All modern buildings resemble is because they have been built by steels and concrete which are some abundant cheaper materials. Additionally, the speed of construction is faster due to following the certain scale with modern machines, and as a result, these buildings may not notice the various architectural features between alternative places. Furthermore, urban areas across the globe are becoming more and more alike why there are many tall buildings with shopping malls and fitness centers inside. Basically, people’s demands are highly increasing, and for example, people who live in cities go shopping in leisure time after working hard, or they will go to the fitness centers to exercise regularly.
Nevertheless, this trend can be good or bad for cities around the world. One of the best sides is that residents will enhance their standard of living with high-quality infrastructures. To be specific, city dwellers can live in apartments with sufficient and useful equipment in the buildings. One of the adverse aspects is that losing traditional culture. As a consequence, cities have many tall and resemble buildings which do not make a strong impression on visitors.
In conclusion, the similarity between other cities is a topic which is very relevant to modern society. However, if people think it is good, it will become good. Instead of comparing to in the past, people not only should preserve traditions and customs, but also boost the development of society to keep pace with other cities all over the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31071428571 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87272314456 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621428571429 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4853616781 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.214285714 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275862846539 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849932010376 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056280894249 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151830431371 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018410823769 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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