In the past, people lived in one place for a long time, but now they can live in many different places, what are the reasons? Is this a positive or negative development？
In recent world, it is a common phenomenon that people live in different places throughout their life. However, it is unusual for people to move their living place who lived in the past. This essay will illustrate the reasons for this phenomenon and convince that why this is a great tendency.
In the past, it is hardly any to move about as there is fewer means of transportation. Agriculture was the backbone of economy and many farmers cultivated the land where near the places they lived. Furthermore, most of them reared livestock. With the advancement and development in transportation facilities it convenient and affordable to travel around. They can travel by land, water and air which is almost impossible in the past. For instance, trains and air flights shorten the distance and time to move around and encourage villagers to leaves their hometown and migrate to urban areas for searching a new life.
This is definitely a positive trend because it makes life more challenging and interesting. Every time we live in a new place we get interact with people of different cultures and style of livings. It give us a priceless opportunity to broaden our horizon of thinking, make us more tolerant and respect the cultures of others. Living in the same place will limit our understanding about the world we live, there are still many different and interesting things around the world which is worth to learn, experience and explore.
To conclude, industrialization and improvement in means of transportation are the factors that encourage people to move around. This is undoubtedly a good development which can boost the economy growth and fosters cultural mingling.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, still, as for, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13043478261 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94649434456 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539855072464 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4233438734 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357118907318 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103754209893 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811257332344 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197381883974 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905348188302 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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