In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a%0Ahobby. To what extent do you think this is a positive trend?
Shopping has been changed a lot in recent years. Earlier, it was seen just as a daily work but it became a hobby in modern era. Many positive trends are there of shopping as a hobby. However, a negative side also cannot be ignored.
On the one hand, individuals who pruse shopping as a hobby may waste their time. Many hours of a day they spend in shopping malls and complexes. This time can be used to learn something new regarding to their study or vocational training which would be beneficial later in life. it has noticed by many surveys that extra time for education becomes student more successful than those Spoiling their time on roads and markets for doing silly activities which include shopping also. Morever, habit of shopping also led to small illegal activities like theft some money from house when parents say no to give money for it. After sometime it can be changed into big crimes. Therefore,shopping should be in limit.
On the other hand,positive aspects of it is also there. Firstly, when people visit outside for shopping than they will find new friends which help them to reduce daily life stress. Secondly, by visiting shopping malls people learn how to behave with different type of people as almost every type of people visit here. To illustrate,
people who are going market places and out areas are more cooperative. With these skills person can impress to anyone. As a result of this, people will became more successful in their life.
In conclusion, shopping has many merits but demerits overweigh it as I mentioned above paragraph, so there should be limits on it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81884057971 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52097897922 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61231884058 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.9014046852 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.8888888889 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181716070643 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605923753578 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607258308383 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0991486237491 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296090647521 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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