In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extent do you think this is a positive trend?
These days, many people, especially women, tend to go shopping as a leisure activity, rather than a simple household task as in the past. In my opinion, I strongly believe that this is a positive trend and will present my reasons in this essay.
To commence with, going shopping on ocassion can be seen as an effective means of relaxation. It is because shopping allows people to be indulged in the world filled with attractive material goods, which ease their eyes and their mind. For example, visiting a clothes store on the weekend or special days provides women with a sense of comfort and satisfaction. Moreover, being able to buy their all- time favourite dress with their own money will bring them a great sense of achievement.
Furthermore, many people may go shopping in order to renew themselves as well as their own daily life. It is because of the fact that keeping a material thing for a long time may lead people to feel tedious and low-spirit, For example, a woman who repeatedly wears the same set of clothes may come over as being quite boring and monotonous. Therefore, buying new things such as clothes and household furniture will contribute to bringing people a new lease of life and make themselves become more diverse and flexible.
To conclude, I can say in affirmative that going shopping regularly as a hobby serves people as a means of entertainment, and at the same time, colour people’s daily life with changes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
... as well as their own daily life. It is because of the fact that keeping a material thing for a long tim...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81526104418 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68140192654 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59437751004 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4782297183 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.9 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145763573612 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600616689143 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490333492702 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100299042165 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579437392044 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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