In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?
Stepping into the 21st century, students are more likely to have more chance to study overseas instead of in their own country. In my opinion, the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages.
Admittedly, studying and living abroad broadens students' perspective on life. In fact, many foreign countries offer new and better learning techniques to educate the present generation, so international students may also gain a broader context for understanding today’s most pressing global issues. Furthermore, studying abroad can open student's eyes to plenty of job opportunities for their major that are beyond what they envision. Seeing different situations where their discipline applies globally can help students reach for the stars and find the place that best suits their personal interests and goals. Last but not least, living in another country will help shape students into independent and adventurous adults. Particularly, this opportunity makes the students get out from their comfort zone themselves to solve unexpected problems themselves, planning financial schedule and so on.
However, studying abroad is also risky in terms of time and money. More specifically, students going abroad need to study that country’s national language first, so there is nothing for them to do except learning the language. Studying in a foreign country costs more money than in their country. So, some of them may not focus on their studies because there is nobody around to supervise them. In addition, the lack of family support can lead to a sense of isolation and frustration of students, and therefore affects their study’s performances.
In conclusion, despite several drawbacks, the source of students studying overseas is one of the most important factors for every country's development, especially the developing countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'getting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: getting
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'cost'?
Suggestion: cost
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59027777778 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90672080681 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635416666667 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.7682554423 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.846153846 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331027999228 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127354760007 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718065028495 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201451036165 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733784175301 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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