In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Education is the first preference nowadays since
ancient times, but there is a difference between education of present and past time, as compared to the past decades.This essay would throw light on the concerned issue and also discusse about about its merits and demerits.
To begin with, the globalisation has been affecting the study in variois ways, as in the past pupils were bound to do their further study in their own nation.The options were less as compared to the present time, after completing the educational qualification they tend to achieve professional qualification in the similar nation. But now this trend has been changed do to the several options of studying in other countries,which attracts the students by attractive culture,exploring the world etc. That enhance the interest of children to go there,tgey get better pay's and along with experience of the living standard. A person who might not have the economical status well in his country he can think to re-establish it by going overseas which would give him/her satisfaction regarding fulfill his dreams and indeeds.
Furthermore,it has another foremost advantage that pupil get the knowledge of other nations skills about how they teach and get experienced about get the other study approaches ,which can help him when he come back to his country the country's can hire him by giving the attractive salary according to his interest that would only effect him but rather than that it would help to boost the economical statusof countrt as well.As an instance, the multinational companies or reputed organisations try to find the person who have a plethora of experiences and knowledge about the skills.So, in case of abroad studied student would definitely be high.
However, studying abroad have some negative consequences also.The children might get attracted to explore the other nation but he/she should think about their own country, that particular curriculum which has been teaching since long related to india would totally disconnected with that.As an example, particular nation have its own history,so the person who has been gone to the other nation to study the degree in history would learn about the individual nations prehistory.Which would led to increase his historical knowledge about that nation but this would make unable to know about his owm country.
In conclusion, studying abroad have many futuristic options to change the individuals lifespan though, their are also some demerits.So there must be the awareness in the person about the negative ways too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, well, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2162.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 408.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29901960784 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87632756906 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536764705882 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 662.4 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.2975951904 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 187.627123572 49.4020404114 380% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 270.25 106.682146367 253% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.0 20.7667163134 246% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.625 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195035108972 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814100967204 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588323194338 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896393345923 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560141606989 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.0 13.0946893788 221% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 11.3001002004 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.35 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.1190380762 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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