People aim to achieve a balance between their work and lives. But few people achieve it. What are the causes of problems? How to overcome it?
In the contemporary world, it is true that most people pursue a work-life balance, which is a tough goal to achieve. There are several reasons for this phenomenon, and a number of solutions should be adopted to improve it.
There are two primary reasons why most people find it challenging to achieve a balance between their work and personal lives. Firstly, in light of the competitive employment market, the lack of job opportunities forces people to spend more time on their jobs to hold their positions. Furthermore, people tend to focus on professional prospects to affirm their worth, leading them to overlook family and friend relationships. In addition, the proliferation of mobile phones and their applications allows people to tackle their tasks easily and immerse themselves in virtual life, which would exacerbate the distance between family members.
Given the aforementioned causes, several measures could be taken to alleviate this problem. First and foremost, it is necessary for workaholics to make a schedule by sharing equal time per day for their work and lives. It allows them to manage and distribute their effort in various activities. Reducing the time spent on their mobile phones and spending it on chats with their parents are also vital solutions to close their relationships. Furthermore, people will have enough time for their hobbies and several activities that help them take care of themselves.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons why achieving a work-life balance seems to be difficult for most people, and steps need to be taken to tackle this problem, such as following a time schedule or isolating a mobile phone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 67, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'achieving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: achieving
...ons why most people find it challenging to achieve a balance between their work and person...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19557195572 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85538765392 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553505535055 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1828341125 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.333333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261551223502 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979343412623 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740200420239 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15052188037 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799853895046 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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