At present, people living in mordern society use drug but the youngsters are addicting too much with is. Some think that family is responsible for this bad habit, while others think that society influance young people most. However, there are some measurs that should be taken to reduce it.
To begin with, the attraction on drug amongst adult make the youngsters to use this for various purposes. For example, if a child see their perents using too much medecine in any minor diseases, he will aslo found interest to use those drugs at any simple uneasiness. In that case, children learning this type of bad habit onto themselves which is resulted in worsen their health condition and lessen their power of antibody. Furthermore, the bad friend circle are the second major responsible for addiction to drug. To illustrate, youngsters stay long time with their friends outside their home, when they have to go various types of circumstances regardless good or bad. So, they sometime go with worse company which affect them to take drug for amousment and it turns into addiction eventually.
However, there are some means that can be putted into practise to resolve this problem. Firstly, parents should not use drug or smoke in front of their children, and they should have a open eye on their children. Therefore, they will not get in touch with drug and not take it for ther fear of their parents. Moreover, individuals should avoid bad company which will help them to stay away from drug.
In a nutshell, the addiction of drug comes to the youngsters from too much usage of drug by their parents, and bad friends also effect children mind to take drug. Parents should not use drug and smoke in front of the child and keep a full notice in their young child to save themselves from addiction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...of their children, and they should have a open eye on their children. Therefore, ...
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Line 7, column 145, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'mind taking'.
Suggestion: mind taking
...s, and bad friends also effect children mind to take drug. Parents should not use drug and s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81935483871 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39696304557 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532258064516 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6824677021 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196012095294 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785068128572 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466843202015 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14351034546 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362054667581 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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