People in all modern societies use drugs but today s youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs and at an increasingly early age Some sociologists claim that parents an do there members of society often set a bad example Discuss the causes

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People in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologists claim that parents an do there members of society often set a bad example.Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.

Nowadays, it is a general issue of young people tendency of illegal drugs use.In this modern world there are plenty of factors which are influencing on growing rate of drug consumption.

First of all I will explain about why do people addict on drugs.This includes several low and extreme levels of combine circumstances which are individual biology,social environment, stage of development,age. Also this scenario does not contains any social limitations like poor rich,young old, urban Rural;what ever it is any one could trap to this disaster.on presently there are 21 billions of teenagers are addicted in drugs use in all over the world.Substantially the stress and depression plays a immense roll on this matter.The poor relationship with family may neglect children also pressure on schools and high expectations of parents and teachers may tend to children feel stress. Moreover,unsatisfactory of work and financial issue also giving a huge impact on this point.

Addiction of drugs may cost greatly on personal lives and to whole society.The effects of banned drugs permits to wast and destroys youngsters talents and skills which are can use on world development.on this situation there is a up coming argument on 'do we wait and see until valuable young lives collapse because of drugs affection".To this it is need to take a strong practical actions to defend this factor. Government,parents,teacher,organizations;all of these should associate together to build an enduring barrier on agents to producing and supplying drugs along with curing appearance of psychological illness.

On conclusion, my belief is continuous flow of education about only demerits of harmful drugs, government encouragement on strong rules and innovations of new psychological implementing features which are not harm to humans and develop family relationship with limiting school pressure may can help to block this problem to an extent.

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Sentence: Nowadays, it is a general issue of young peoples tendency of illegal drugs use.In this modern world there are plenty of factors which are influencing on growing rate of drug consumption.
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Sentence: Addiction of drugs may cost greatly on personal lives and to whole society.The effects of banned drugs permits to wast and kill youngsters talents and skills which are can use on world development. on this situation there is a up coming argument on 'do we wait and see until valuable young lives collapse because of drugs affection'.
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